that's beautiful - I like the use of "as the blessed single eye of the world, red like the face (lapana) of a very young ape, was falling quickly below the mountain-tops, as if it were being scolded by the glances, crooked through anger, of female lovers who were happy because of drinking alcoholm as the region of the divine hermitage was whitened by the streams of milk flowing from the herd of cows with milk-yielding udders"

AND
that's possibly the longest sentence I have ever seen....